iPROUD 1

Hi and welcome back to my blog. Today I am blogging about my iPROUD. I had to chose my favorite piece of work then put on a dock then write about it. 

My Best Learning

This is my Scene Description

Task: Write a scene description of a picture you have chosen.

Success Criteria

• Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
• Interesting beginning and ending
• Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
• Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
• Uses the present tense

As I turn around I see the most breathtaking sight. As I look around I see the golden sunshine shining through the tree’s onto the lake making the water look like gold. Is this real? I rub my eyes to see if it is a dream- it’s not!  The rushing waterfalls crash onto the glowing lake. The fresh lake water smells amazing. I can hear the birds chirping a beautiful song in the trees. The feel of the fresh breeze running through my hair feels nice.

I can see the lime green leaves on the tree waving around. Yuck I quietly said to myself as I feel the slimy and slippery moss on my feet as I jump across the soaking rocks. It looks like a tree with golden leaves because of the sunlight. I can see the little fishes swimming around in the lake. Now that I have been here, I never want to leave. It is just too beautiful.

I am proud of this because I spent a lot of time on it and I think it is really good

My biggest challenge was trying to think of really good descriptive words.

By guys hope you enjoyed my blog post

Super Fly

Hi guys welcome back and today I will be blogging about my weekend at Super Fly. I won the Super Fly tickets off the radio. They had a list of all the people in my hub up on the wall then they threw a dart to see who's name it landed on. It landed on mine. That's is how I won them. OK Now onto Super Fly. I won four tickets and I took Amie, My cousin, My mum and me. For those of you who don't know what Super Fly is It is a HUGE water slide with three slides to choose from and it looks like this

I like the middle one best because me, Amie and my cousin had a race. I went on the middle one and Amie and my cousin went on the the side ones and I won because the middle one was the fastest. After that we went to the park near the beach. The park was really fun. I went on a lot of the things that spun and then after I felt really sick. After the park we all went down the beach for a walk. Amie found this huge piece of wood that we went to play on. After we played on the wood we went looking for shells. That was my favorite part because I found lots of little white ones and I gave one to Amie. Then my mum took me and Amie to Amie's house and we went in the pool then we went into the spa because the pool was too cold. When we got out of the spa we went into the play house and played minecraft until I left. 

By guys I hope you enjoyed my blog post see you next time : )

Puzzle Piece

Hi guys welcome to my blog. This time I am blogging about my puzzle piece. Here is a photo of my puzzle piece. It is upside down because I started it on the wrong side and I did not realize until I was almost done. You were not allowed another one or the puzzle wouldn't fit together.

Here are some more that I thought were pretty cool.

Here is the wall with all of them on there

Well guys I hope you enjoyed my blog post. See you next time.

Camp

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog. This time I am blogging about camp. I am very excited and a bit nervous because camp is tomorrow! All the year 4's are staying at Omatua the whole time. They are so lucky. Year 5's have to stay one night Omatua and one night at Weka. I am excited because we are staying at Omatua. I am nervous because we are staying at Weka and I have never stayed there before. My traveling group is Camo, Me, Bella and Van. The person taking us is James, Bella's dad. At Omatua we are sleeping in the big hall and at Weka I don't know where we are sleeping.