Friday, June 12, 2015
W.A.L.T write a justified opinion.
I think no trees should be cut because our trees prevent most of our air.
It is not fair on all the little birds that make their nests in trees and the eggs crack.
Most of our fruit comes of our trees. so if we cut down all our trees we would not have as much fruit as we have now.
If we cut down all the trees all the creatures that live in the bushes and the trees will have nowhere to live.
for example kiwi’s live in the wild so if we cut down all the trees were will they live.
I am blogging this because I am proud of my opinion and of how much writing I did. We were learning to write a justified opinion.
Friday, June 5, 2015
I am blogging this because I am proud of how much writing I did and I used quite a bit of descriptive words.
We were learning to write a narrative and to use descriptive word's
Once upon a time there was a beautiful young lady called Cinderella. Cinderella had an evil step-mother. She was horrible to Cinderella she made Cinderella do everything. Cinderella also had three sisters and one brother. Two ugly step-sisters and one little sister that acted like an angel and a older brother. Their names were Angela that was the little sister,Louie was the big brother who was fantastically nice to Cinderella.The ugly step-sisters names were Anastasia and Lily. One day there was a royal ball.Cinderella really wanted to go but she couldn't. Her evil step mother made a deal if she could get all her work done and find something to wear then she gave her more work to finish.Cinderella also had to get her sister's dresses and gloves and stuff ready.Cinderella went and cried up stairs.Suddenly POP!!! Cinderella’s fairy godmother came out of nowhere. Now now she said to Cinderella we can sort something out.All we need to do is give you an outfit,get you a carriage and get you a horse and get you some footmen. Now we will poof you all those thing’s.Poof,poof,poof and poof,there now we have all those things you can go to the ball.There is one thing you need to know is that the magic ends at midnight remember,the magic ends at midnight” fairy godmother”.When she went into the ball she saw the most handsome prince in the world.The prince asked Cinderella to dance She said yes.They danced for the rest of the night.Ding Ding Ding Ding the bell rang it was midnight.I have to go said Cinderella rushing out the door.Slip went one of Cinderella’s beautiful glass slipper’s.Her Handsome prince saved the slipper and went to every house and tried the slipper on every princess suddenly... knock knock knock. The prince knocked on the door The evil step-mother locked Cinderella up in her room.Then her pet mice found the key to Cinderella’s room and slid it under the door of Cinderella’s room. She unlocked the door and luckily the prince was still here. She rushed downstairs and asked the prince if she could tried on the slipper and he said yes. The slipper fit perfectly. The prince proposed to Cinderella and she said yes. Then they had a beautiful wedding and lived happily ever after.