My River Trip

Hi guys and welcome back to another blog. It is 2017!!!! Today I am going to share with you my River trip story. I hope you enjoy. Here it is:

WALT choose words that describe a moment (in an exciting way) for the reader

SUCCESS CHECKLIST

• begins in the action
• present tense (I am, not I was)
• some short, sharp sentences; mixed with some longer ones
• strong verbs
• uses the senses (look, feel, hear, taste, smell)
• language features (simile, alliteration, onomatopoeia, metaphor)
• show personality (sounds like you, humour, feelings, exaggeration)

I slowly and scaredly walk into the shallow,freezing cold river. My goosebump covered legs shiver as I slowly kneel down onto my knees. I see a tiny little goldfish swim straight past my legs. I can hear all of my cousins screaming and laughing. I see a huge mossy rock next to where my cousins are swimming. I swim over to the huge rock faster than a cheetah.

I climb onto the humongous moss covered rock. The huge green rock is super slippery, I put my foot closer to the top and then… Slip. I have fallen back into the river. Lucky I have fallen into the deep part. Lots of tiny, shiny little goldfish swim past me as I struggle to stand up. I try to catch a beautiful little fish but it swims away before I can even touch it.

My biggest cousin Julie sees a little ledge on a small cliff that we can jump off. We all swim over to the ledge and Julie climbs up. The water is WAY to shallow to jump into. It is only up to my knees.”Julie, it is only up to my knees you can't jump from there, you will hurt yourself” I shout”.”That suck’s” Julie says as she carefully climbs down the steep ledge. We are walking back to the deep part to have a water fight and splash.I am having a fantastic time at the river. The river is my favorite place ever.

Well that is my river trip writing. I hope you enjoyed it. I certainly enjoyed writing it. And being at the river. Once again I hope you enjoyed. Make sure to check out my other blogs. And I will see you next time...

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P.E Blog

Hey Guys! Welcome back to another blog. Today I am sharing with you my P.E! I am in the Atlantic group. We are the best group. These are all the groups: Atlantic, Arctic and Pacific We try our hardest and we like a challenge. Sadly I was away on athletics day so I can not share with you athletics day. P.E is one of my favorite subjects because it is really fun and it gives you a chance to learn some new sports and to get outside. I love P.E

Well that was my P.E blog. I hope you enjoyed and I will see you next time.

Here are some photos of me:

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Literacy Blog Post

Hey Guys!! Welcome back to another blog post. Today I am showing you my literacy writing. This was a retell. This was really hard because I had to pick a movie but there were so many great Movies to pick from. I picked the jungle book because I know it really really well. Here it is! It is still a work in progress.

The Jungle Book

Decades ago in a jungle far far away there was a baby floating in a river. The baby was crying like it was hurt. It had been sent away by it's mum who could not take care of it.

A black shiny puma named Bagheera heard the innocent baby crying. The animal ran to the river and rescued the poor baby. “Waaaaaa” cried the baby. Bagheera carried the crying baby to the wolf’s den to ask them if they could raise him. “We have never raised a human before. But we will try.” Said the wolves  

They named him Mowgli. He grew up with the wolves until he was about 5. One day he was walking in the woods and a bear came out from behind a tree. The bear's name was Baloo.

He asked his wolf parents if he could live with the bear since they have been playing together a lot. They meet Baloo and they said yes. Mowgli grew up with the bear and he did everything like a bear. He learnt how to catch fish like a bear, He could walk like a bear and even fight like a bear. He was raised by Baloo Until he was eleven years old.

One day Mowgli and Baloo were floating in the river when Mowgli heard a noise. Mowgli was on Baloo’s belly while Baloo was sleeping. Suddenly 5 huge goldish brownish monkey sprung out of the tree and snachted Mowgli. Balloo woke up in shock. “Balloo help me” Cried Mowgli scaredly. “I will save you” Said Balloo Trying to reach out to Mowgli, But he was too late. Balloo sprinted as fast as he could to get Bagheera. He got Bagheera then they found the monkeys and followed them. They found the monkeys base.

To Be Continued..

That is my writing hope you enjoyed

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Maths Blog Post

Hey guys and welcome back to another blog post.
Today I will be showing you Mine and Amie's maths.

So for this task I had to make an equation and answer it in two ways.

I choose 22x4 and I answered it by using place value and doubles+doubles.

I found this challenging at first but then I got some help and I got it.

This maths task was fun because it was quite challenging and I like a challenge because it stretches my perseverance.Well that was my maths blog. I hope you enjoy and I will see you next time.

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Giraffe Art Blog Post

Hi guys and welcome back to another blog post. Today I will be sharing with you my art. There were three types of art that the hub could pick from. Sketching, Painting and Digi art. I choose painting because I love painting and it is really fun. This took quite a while because we had to draw it which took 2 or 3 days then we had to paint the giraffe, that took about 4 or 5 days. Here is a picture of my art:

There was fun or realistic. I choose fun because it was really colorful and it looked really fun to paint, And it was. Thank you guys sooo much for reading this blog. Tune in to my previous blog that was about my work shop prove it. I will see you guys next time.

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Workshop Prove It

Hello every one and welcome back to another blog post. Today I will be blogging about my workshop prove it. This workshop was about editing. Here it is:
Workshop Prove It

I learnt how to edit

Here is an example:

(Bad version)

on the weekend amie came to my grandmas with me we got to name the lambs i named mine cloudy mc fluff butt and amie named hers cloud princess poof it was really fun

(Good version)

On the weekend Amie came to my grandmas with me. We got to name the lambs. I named mine Cloudy Mcfluff Butt and Amie named hers Cloud Princess Poof it was really fun!

Well that is my workshop prove it! I hope you enjoyed this blog. I will do my next blog A.S.A.P see ya next time

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Colour Poem

Hey guys! Welcome back to my blog. Today I am going to be sharing my colour poem with you. If you do not know what a colour poem is, it is a poem where you have to choose a colour and describe something that is the color that you pick. Here is mine:
Colour Poem

WALT to use descriptive language to help create an image (picture) in our reader's head

Success Criteria

• Use adjectives to describe the noun
• Use adverbs to describe the verb (describe how the action is happening)
• Use a range of verbs to explain what is happening
• Use a range of nouns that help us identify with a colour

1.Pink is the color of fluffy unicorns dancing excitedly on a rainbow

2.Pink is the color of a strawberry ice-cream melting quickly

3.Pink is the color of glitterry higheels stomping loudly on the concrete

4.Pink is the color of a stripy duvet covor slipping of the bed quickly

5.Pink is the color of 100 layers of lipstick sticking hevily to my lips

6.Pink is the color of a tall flower falling over slowly

1. Yellow is the color of pikachu fighting ratata viciously

2. Yellow is the color of the sun shining brightly down on the mountains

3.Yellow is the color of a freshly grown banana falling slowly of the tree

4.Yellow is the color of a slimy fish swimming slowly in the fish tank

5.Yellow is the color of wet paint getting splattered loudly onto the wall

6.Yellow is the color of an tounge sticking out emoji sticker sticking tightly onto my hand

7.Yellow is the color of a minions setting up gru's daughters party thoughtfully

1.Blue is the color of the oceon creating humungoues waves beutifully

2.Blue is the color of my laptop making clicking noises as I type carefully

3.Blue is the color of a dyed cat eating it's fish food messily

4.Blue is the color of my shining brightly as I look at the sun

5.Blue is the color of dory swimming in the ocean trying to remember her family carefully

6.Blue is the color of the bright sky creating clouds slowly

1.Black is the color of a fluffy black cat rustling around in the blankets carelessly

2.Black is the color of a bat flying around and squeaking loudly in a cave

3.Black is the color of batman flying quickly to come save the day

4.Black is the color of a moustach sticking to a fancy mans face heavily

5.Black is the color of a witch brewing a potion in her brewing room evilly

6.Black is the color of a panda eating bamboo neatly

1.Red is the color of blood slowly trickling down the cut on my finger

2.Red is the color of a rose dying quickly in the rose garden

3.Red is the color of a apple hanging of a tree carefully

4.Red is the color of converses scraping on the concrete loudly

5.Red is the color of Red (the angry bird) getting flung carelessly at the pigs

6.Red is the color of a Ferrari racing down the street fastly

7.Red is the color of crocks stepping in cow poo on the farm disgustingly

Well that is my awesome color poem. Hope you enjoyed this blog. Make sure to tune into my other blogs.

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