Friday, June 26, 2015
Friday, June 12, 2015
No tree's should be cut down
W.A.L.T write a justified opinion.
I think no trees should be cut because our trees prevent most of our air.
It is not fair on all the little birds that make their nests in trees and the eggs crack.
Most of our fruit comes of our trees. so if we cut down all our trees we would not have as much fruit as we have now.
If we cut down all the trees all the creatures that live in the bushes and the trees will have nowhere to live.
for example kiwi’s live in the wild so if we cut down all the trees were will they live.
I am blogging this because I am proud of my opinion and of how much writing I did. We were learning to write a justified opinion.
Friday, June 5, 2015
Cinderella Narrative - Week 7
I am blogging this because I am proud of how much writing I did and I used quite a bit of descriptive words.
We were learning to write a narrative and to use descriptive word's
Cinderella
Once upon a time there was a beautiful young lady called Cinderella. Cinderella had an evil step-mother. She was horrible to Cinderella she made Cinderella do everything. Cinderella also had three sisters and one brother. Two ugly step-sisters and one little sister that acted like an angel and a older brother. Their names were Angela that was the little sister,Louie was the big brother who was fantastically nice to Cinderella.The ugly step-sisters names were Anastasia and Lily. One day there was a royal ball.Cinderella really wanted to go but she couldn't. Her evil step mother made a deal if she could get all her work done and find something to wear then she gave her more work to finish.Cinderella also had to get her sister's dresses and gloves and stuff ready.Cinderella went and cried up stairs.Suddenly POP!!! Cinderella’s fairy godmother came out of nowhere. Now now she said to Cinderella we can sort something out.All we need to do is give you an outfit,get you a carriage and get you a horse and get you some footmen. Now we will poof you all those thing’s.Poof,poof,poof and poof,there now we have all those things you can go to the ball.There is one thing you need to know is that the magic ends at midnight remember,the magic ends at midnight” fairy godmother”.When she went into the ball she saw the most handsome prince in the world.The prince asked Cinderella to dance She said yes.They danced for the rest of the night.Ding Ding Ding Ding the bell rang it was midnight.I have to go said Cinderella rushing out the door.Slip went one of Cinderella’s beautiful glass slipper’s.Her Handsome prince saved the slipper and went to every house and tried the slipper on every princess suddenly... knock knock knock. The prince knocked on the door The evil step-mother locked Cinderella up in her room.Then her pet mice found the key to Cinderella’s room and slid it under the door of Cinderella’s room. She unlocked the door and luckily the prince was still here. She rushed downstairs and asked the prince if she could tried on the slipper and he said yes. The slipper fit perfectly. The prince proposed to Cinderella and she said yes. Then they had a beautiful wedding and lived happily ever after.
The end.
Thursday, May 28, 2015
Week 5 - Blood Story
BLOOD STORY
“Mum where is my bike.“In the shed honey”. “Ok mum thanks”.I get my bike out of the shed and rush to get my panda helmet. I get on my bike and put my helmet on.”Weeeeeeee” I say as I zoom on my bike on the hard concrete driveway.”Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh”I fall of my bike with a terrified look on my face. I look down,all I see is blood.I realise that I skidded on the concrete and grased my whole shins.My mum rushed throgh the door to see what is going on.She carries me through the door and dumps me on the couch.Mum gets me two ice packs to put on my bloody bruised thighs.She sees if I am ok.
I am still crying my eyes out. After awhile I stop crying, my shins still hurt heaps but not very much. The next day my legs were so scabby and bruised. I still have one scar on one of my shins.
Wednesday, May 27, 2015
My letter to Martin
Kaydence Munro
Room 21b
Parkvale school
Hastings
23 March 2015
Dear Martin,
I really liked having you at camp because you helped me with lots of stuff and you helped me not give up.Thank you for giving up your time and money to help us kids at camp. I enjoyed having you at camp and helping our group with our activities.
The best thing about Camp Omatua was going tubing and playing in the bamboo forest.
Thanks lots
From Kaydence.
We had to make a letter for a parent at camp.
My letter was for Martin,He's Lachlan's
Thursday, April 30, 2015
Camp omatua
Camp omatua
Hi this is me (Kaydence)at
camp on the contraption.All the groups
had to make one. The contraption had
to carry me across the river without getting.
It did but i touched the
water and we were not aloud to.
A contraption is something
that you use if someone
gets injured.
This is my activity group Eva,Aston,
Zane,Oscar and me.My groups adult is Martin And Kirsten.
This is my group when we were
making Martin his super hero
costume.Our costume had a
awesome cape and a top and
cool pants.His name was Mega man.
He was super strong and smart.Then we did the
Super hero parade. Our super hero
did not win. Mustachio's group won.
Mustachio's group all got metals.After that
we played spotlight.The first game was my first
game ever
THE END
Hi this is me (Kaydence)at
camp on the contraption.All the groups
had to make one. The contraption had
to carry me across the river without getting.
It did but i touched the
water and we were not aloud to.
A contraption is something
that you use if someone
gets injured.
This is my activity group Eva,Aston,
Zane,Oscar and me.My groups adult is Martin And Kirsten.
This is my group when we were
making Martin his super hero
costume.Our costume had a
awesome cape and a top and
cool pants.His name was Mega man.
He was super strong and smart.Then we did the
Super hero parade. Our super hero
did not win. Mustachio's group won.
Mustachio's group all got metals.After that
we played spotlight.The first game was my first
game ever
THE END
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